I wrote this poem 5 eyars ago, and when I read it yesterday, it felt childish, impractical, yet innocent. So I asked my sister to type it out (at that time I had no PC, and I had written it on a paper!). Here it is folks, enjoy!! Comments are welcome. BTW, this is the first shit I ever wrote in my life!
Are you in love?
You know you are in love
When u cant sleep at night
You know you are in love
When she insults you and u don’t put up a fight
You know you are in love
When she comes in every dream
You know you are in love
When, on seeing her, your eyes gleam
You know you are in love
When u start dreaming while awake
You know you are in love
When u only give her and never take
You know you are in love
When you miss her if she’s not there
You know you are in love
When she is present and u only stare
You know you are in love
When u feel a lot of changes in u
You know you are in love
When, for every matter, u have a different view
You know you are in love
When u feel very responsible
You know you are in love
When suddenly people say that u have become sensible
You know you are in love
When u keep talking about her
You know you are in love
When your friends call you a mad lover
You know you are in love
When you avoid her in front of others
You know you are in love
When u suddenly start befriending her brothers
You know you are in love
When u never feel alone
You know you are in love
When u think of her as a part of ur own
You know you are in love
When, for her u start fearing
You know you are in love
When u love every dress that she is wearing
You know you are in love
When u are afraid to lose her
You know you are in love
When each and every time you choose her
You know you are in love
When, without her u feel incomplete
You know you are in love
When, as soon as she is around u, u feel complete
You know you are in love
When u overlook her faults
You know you are in love
When, u find sweetness even in the salts
You know you are in love
When u feel that u owe something to someone
You know you are in love
When seeing her u realize that she is the one
You know you are in love
When u feel u can’t do anything wrong
You know you are in love
When even the shortest distance appears to be long
You know you are in love
When all of a sudden u start respecting god
You know you are in love
When, for every action of hers, u only applaud
You know you are in love
If you have read till now
You know you are in love
If on reading this u exclaim wow
You know you are in love
For sure, if you also start writing like this
And while writing this, u think that on reading this she will give you a kiss
Oh Wow!!! You sure are in love
whos she dude…n that too b4 5yrs…
Did it last?
awesome ya after reading this i feel that i m really in love
No it did not last!
in ur words..
“this is nice shit man”
lolzz…i kno im not in love…when i cant go thru the whole poem at a stretch…
Anup, you forgot you werre the first one to read this poem and like it back in class 11.
A good one and a funny one and as you had said, the innocence can be felt. You really WERE in love then or was it infatuation–whatever, when it happens it does feel this good
hey bro…kewl man…i hold the credit of preserving it in my own poem book
“When, u find sweetness even in the salts
You know you are in love”
read only one…..and liked these lines well…too good lines
I think I am in love.
Nice one
I dont know who you are…But davame those lyrics are :::fans myself::: (ahahaha) amazing
I read this poem again n i feel it doesnt have an end…….
where is the continutaion……
Man..thats quite a big poem you wrote…too big to read in one glance..
Sorry, I stumbled late on your blog, but better late then never..
Thats awesome thing you wrote. Keep it up. I am tempted to copy this work, but now its not that romantic for me, as me is freshly heart broken..
Would be obliged if you can write for a hurt souls..