Are you in love??

I wrote this poem 5 eyars ago, and when I read it yesterday, it felt childish, impractical, yet innocent. So I asked my sister to type it out (at that time I had no PC, and I had written it on a paper!). Here it is folks, enjoy!! Comments are welcome. BTW, this is the first shit I ever wrote in my life!

Are you in love?

You know you are in love

When u cant sleep at night

You know you are in love

When she insults you and u don’t put up a fight

You know you are in love

When she comes in every dream

You know you are in love

When, on seeing her, your eyes gleam

You know you are in love

When u start dreaming while awake

You know you are in love

When u only give her and never take

You know you are in love

When you miss her if she’s not there

You know you are in love

When she is present and u only stare

You know you are in love

When u feel a lot of changes in u

You know you are in love

When, for every matter, u have a different view

You know you are in love

When u feel very responsible

You know you are in love

When suddenly people say that u have become sensible

You know you are in love

When u keep talking about her

You know you are in love

When your friends call you a mad lover

You know you are in love

When you avoid her in front of others

You know you are in love

When u suddenly start befriending her brothers

You know you are in love

When u never feel alone

You know you are in love

When u think of her as a part of ur own

You know you are in love

When, for her u start fearing

You know you are in love

When u love every dress that she is wearing

You know you are in love

When u are afraid to lose her

You know you are in love

When each and every time you choose her

You know you are in love

When, without her u feel incomplete

You know you are in love

When, as soon as she is around u, u feel complete

You know you are in love

When u overlook her faults

You know you are in love

When, u find sweetness even in the salts

You know you are in love

When u feel that u owe something to someone

You know you are in love

When seeing her u realize that she is the one

You know you are in love

When u feel u can’t do anything wrong

You know you are in love

When even the shortest distance appears to be long

You know you are in love

When all of a sudden u start respecting god

You know you are in love

When, for every action of hers, u only applaud

You know you are in love

If you have read till now

You know you are in love

If on reading this u exclaim wow

You know you are in love

For sure, if you also start writing like this

And while writing this, u think that on reading this she will give you a kiss

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19 thoughts on “Are you in love??

  1. Neha Kumar says:

    Oh Wow!!! You sure are in love 😀

  2. ramu says:

    whos she dude…n that too b4 5yrs…

  3. namethegame says:

    Did it last?

  4. mehul says:

    awesome ya after reading this i feel that i m really in love

  5. Devesh says:

    No it did not last!

  6. Rishabh says:

    in ur words..
    “this is nice shit man”

  7. Anup says:

    lolzz…i kno im not in love…when i cant go thru the whole poem at a stretch…

  8. Devesh says:

    Anup, you forgot you werre the first one to read this poem and like it back in class 11. 😦

  9. Vidya says:

    A good one and a funny one and as you had said, the innocence can be felt. You really WERE in love then or was it infatuation–whatever, when it happens it does feel this good 🙂

  10. Mansi says:

    hey bro…kewl man…i hold the credit of preserving it in my own poem book 😉

  11. Parvathy says:

    “When, u find sweetness even in the salts

    You know you are in love”

    read only one…..and liked these lines well…too good lines

  12. Nasir says:

    I think I am in love.

  13. Shaolin says:

    I dont know who you are…But davame those lyrics are :::fans myself::: (ahahaha) amazing

  14. ramu says:

    I read this poem again n i feel it doesnt have an end…….

  15. ramu says:

    where is the continutaion……

  16. Man..thats quite a big poem you wrote…too big to read in one glance..

    Sorry, I stumbled late on your blog, but better late then never..

    Thats awesome thing you wrote. Keep it up. I am tempted to copy this work, but now its not that romantic for me, as me is freshly heart broken.. 😦

    Would be obliged if you can write for a hurt souls..

  17. monika says:

    it would have been better-if reading this would have been 5 years later=now i feel to be helpless

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